B2B Sales Emails: Writing to Get a Response (Udemy.com)
Your step-by-step guide to writing a winning B2B sales email
Created by: Clare Lynch
Last updated January 2023
What you will learn
- Write a B2B sales email that will get a response
- Avoid the most common mistakes when writing a B2B sales message
- Win your prospect over with a deeper understanding of what motivates them to buy
- Use a powerful four-part framework for crafting any B2B sales message
How it compares
Against the other 107 rated Udemy courses in Sales on CourseDuck:
- Rating4.4 out of 5higher than 25% of them
- Reviews33#104 of 108 by number of reviews
- Length1.1 hoursshorter than 90% of them
- Last updatedJanuary 2023earlier than 83% of them
Course Description
Have you been tasked with writing an email to drum up clients for your business — but you’ve no idea what to say (or how to say it)?
Or maybe you just totally clam up when you’re having to sell your firm and you’re presented with a blank page?
Or, worst of all, you’ve been relying on the same old company boilerplate - with little to no response so far?
If any of those sound like you, don’t worry - we’ve got you covered.
Enrol in this course right away and 90 minutes from now, you’ll have created a compelling, perfectly worded B2B sales email.
A sales email that’s been deliberately crafted to win over that client you’re desperate to land.
What’s more, you’ll have a simple but powerful four-part framework you can use over and over again for all your future B2B sales emails.
As you go through the course, you’ll assemble your first B2B sales email according to our four-part framework for crafting persuasive sales messages:
1. Personalisation
Early in the course, you'll learn how to start with an attention-grabbing opening that builds a connection with your prospect.
We’ll show you how to tailor your message to your prospect, so they’re desperate to hear more from you — even if you’ve never met them before.
2. Problem
Next, we’ll show you how to further deepen your connection with your prospect, by demonstrating you understand their problem — a problem only you can solve, of course!
You’ll learn exactly how to express your prospect’s problem in language that speaks directly to their needs and wants — so they trust you to help with it.
3. Promise
In part 3 of our framework, we show you how to introduce your product or service in a way your prospect finds completely irresistible.
We’ll show you the language to use to phrase your offering as a promise that solves your prospect’s problem — and the language to avoid.
4. Pitch
Finally, we’ll show you how to sign off your email with a compelling call-to-action.
You’ll learn what to ask for — and how to phrase your ask — to maximise your chances of your prospect responding to your mail.
Here’s what else you’ll learn in this course on writing a B2B sales email:
The magic word top all copywriters use to charm their readers
Tips on laying out your email to hook your prospect in — and keep them reading
How to craft a sizzling subject line that screams “open me!”
How to stop your message going straight to the spam folder
The exact time and day to send your message to maximise your chances of getting read
Real-life examples of B2B messages that suck — and examples that succeed
About your instructors
We’re Clare Lynch and David Pollack and we are co-heads of Doris and Bertie, a consultancy that specialises in helping business people write so they get results.
We made this course because over the years, we’ve worked with so many professionals who’ve been asked to write a B2B sales email — but they’ve no idea where to start.
If you’re like them, you may well be a brilliant technical or subject matter expert - but you’ve never been shown how to translate your expertise into a compelling proposition for your firm’s clients.
That’s where we come in. In less than 90 minutes, we’re going to show you the copywriting techniques for transforming what you want to say into something your potential client desperately wants to hear.
So if you like the sound of massively increasing your chances of landing that lucrative client, enrol now.
We look forward to seeing you in the course.
Instructor Details
- 4.4 Rating
33 Reviews
Clare Lynch
A University of Cambridge tutor. A professional copywriter.
WINNER OF UDEMY'S AWARD 2019 FOR STUDENT SUCCESS
University of Cambridge tutor Dr Clare Lynch is an expert writer with decades of experience.
Clare hasn’t simply edited the work of other journalists at elite publications, such as The Financial Times. She’s also herself a hugely successful copywriter in her own right.
What's more, in October 2019, Udemy bestowed their Student Success award on Clare for her dedication to her Udemy students.
20+ years of writing experience
In her 20+ year career, Clare has crafted copy from scratch for elite clients in a wide range of fields, including lifestyle, retail, property, tech, pharma, finance and government.
Over the course of that career, Clare has honed her techniques for getting under any reader’s skin – and crafting messages that instantly resonate with the target audience. Techniques she now shares with over 28,000 students on Udemy.
Clare’s experience as a writer embraces a huge range of writing formats and styles – including case studies, white papers, feature articles, direct mail campaigns, web content, ad copy, video scripts, CEO speeches and brand messaging.
A blogging expert
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Reviews
By Subhajit Sur on 3/12/2025
It was very informative. Great lectures.
By Antje Klass-Vorreiter GREEN Solar Academ on 4/4/2024
Yes, it is a good match. Also taking notes on all the common mistakes i have been making.
By Maxwell Swannell on 2/26/2024
The course was really good for showing me what I've been doing ineffectively, and gave me a lot of actionable changes I can make to my B2B emails.
By Cynthia L Mills on 8/21/2023
Dr. Lynch is a good teacher. She is very insightful with her knowledge of proper use of English. She knows what is needed in the business world and knows how to reach your customers through your business emails.
By Christopher de Roulet on 8/10/2023
I'm familiar with all the concepts discussed so far.
By Vandhanaa KR on 7/17/2023
It seems like I have learnt the art of writing a sales email in a very short time. And the task for me now is only practice, testing, practice and perfection. The way Clare & David taught to the point with no fairytales is beautiful.
By Erich Angermayr on 6/23/2023
Thanks, Clare and David, for this excellent, engaging, and no-fluff course on writing B2B emails.
By John Morlan on 2/23/2023
I think the content is really good and I like how to the point it all is. Excited to learn more. You all are amazing!
By Thabian Sutherland on 11/20/2022
Excellent content. This course has massively helped me write engaging emails that have triggered positive replies. I highly recommend this course.
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